NLPrincess13

Thank you all for your reviews, i'll try harder besides it's my first time to write a novel!!! thanks again

Ola to you NafeCT thanks for the review.... thanks for the idea it's totally considered cause i was tweaked at it too :D you actually made me smile, Big thank ...

Ok, like cos', somethin......!!!! it supposed to be something, because! :D:D you know " when i was new member?!" they kept on saying about following the rules. sorry i get ...

Now it's better, i can feel the flow rising, but the problem of it its length. you know! there were so perfect lines followed by other lines that you have ...

thanks, yeah i think your thought has a point :D thanks again :D!!!

thanks guys for the positive reviews!!! :D

Thanks, yeah i puzzle tenses sometimes.... I'll keep that n mind :D thanks for reviewing OxJazzy :D

i know, it's very old one and my first, I'll try my best next time :D thanks for reviewing

very good, i guess "I'm not sure why I wrote this" is exactly why you write it! :D good job, Keep up update us with more pieces

Thanks ADream!!! Thank you guys for all the positive comments :D

Thanks, Dude! :D

i can sense its emotion, completely depressing feeling flows there and the pain clearly shows in your words. very good , keep up...... :D

i can relate to it, i get my share of being bullied too!.... i like it.... keep up the good work :D

it flows perfectly :D, it can easily evoke the emotions loved it!! keep up, can't wait for more pieces!!

thank you guys!!!... yeah i thought that there could be other words to be replaced! :D thank you again!! :D