Myth

DD gets her own CD? You lucky thing! That's a really nice idea, Cal =]

Thank you all for reading and critiquing! Now: Kitty : This is a one-off so Aethel and Constable will never see each other again. Imp : Those sentences were a ...

Shafter! Thanks for the critique, never managed to say it on here XD The merrow thing is explained in a later chapter, won't be updating this but thanks for reading ...

Cloasia doesn't appear to have much of a purose apart from throwing insults at Jon. He seems to be a charater you could develop, so many times I've seen arrogant ...

Green = Cooment/Correction Black = Review * He heard the Elementar shift. “Are you all right?” she asked. “I heard you cry out, but the mistress…” Is there a certain ...

A really good beginning with the isolation showing from the first few lines. And I got the impression this he was an animal at first through 'cave'. Would like to ...

Everyone : Thank you all for reading and picking out the errors! Unfortunately, I won't be posting anymore because I'm leaving and I wouldn't want anyone to post when I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Indeed, Tip’s warning on Tap’s sense of time was proved true. For it was not a half hour, an hour, ...

Interesting little scene. I would have liked to see a little more description—not too much, mind—otherwise it makes you think about dreams and faeries. Well - it does that to ...

Sari : This is the old thread and the old post which you didn't need to critique. Most of the changes were already made in the new version: Any further ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “We hear you [.] ” yawned Tip, ruffling his blond hair and slapping his hat on. Period should be a ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * There were so few clouds out that day ... that he felt a little annoyed with it all. Uh – ...

Mr Green : Thank you for reading. I'm actually writing the chapter where this takes place, since posting I've decided to include it in. I'll be posting the first parts ...

Fishface : Like Imp said this is a sketch, doesn't really go into the story and I'd really appreciate it if you'd give suggestions on improving the piece. Thanks, Imp.

Charles Townshend (1725 - 1767) The Townshend Act was passed just before his death. But Wikipedia seems to call him Townsend and Townshend, don't know what's going on there XD ...