Myth

Hello Alison. I think you did a good job with this, take a look at what the above crits suggest and make changes. One thing I'd like to add is ...

A severe looking woman appeared in the doorway. Her black hair streaked grey was pulled back into a tight bun. On her hawk-like nose rested a pair of wire spectacles, ...

I don't know if I've read any of your previous works but this was sweet. Sarah began to drift back off to sleep when a groan sobered her into wakefulness. ...

Snoink! I love this short piece. He wanted going to talk to her, to tell her much he loved her, to say everything, just in case she… I was a ...

I love mysterires! Write more please, I want to know who this person is, a sort of writer? Oh, you have a Rion Vernon girl in your avatar. I love ...

That was imaginative. Only two suggestions: The entire family is out, at school and at work. I snuck out of my cage which was unlocked and walked out of the ...

But to this man, it meant nothing; he just sat on a stump and waited. His black hair was tied back in a ponytail, which was matted with snow. His ...

Archie placed the letter back down on his desk, and turned to stare out the small window of his office. There were quite a few people out passing back and ...

"My name… is… Sam…uel Garrison," I heaved, praying for oxygen. The sky began to turn a brilliant bluish hue and my lungs ached terribly. I tried freeing myself by punching ...

The last thing Syriana saw was a blade, thick and transient in the sunlight as it sliced through the skull of her little sister. Barely able to see, Syriana struggled ...

Jane farcry woke with little elegance, a damp patch of pillow soaked in her snot had formed through the night beneath her large nose, her eyes, large and brown as ...

Centuries ago, there was a beautiful nymph named Ihmelia. She was gifted with the ability to control plants; she was able to make them wilt or flourish or even become ...

You're can stay the night if you want to. You can ... Antigone has done most of the typos and stuff so I get to the review. I like this, ...

“Kalen, your Grace, it’s no use. She doesn’t remember you,” said Jerome, shaking his head. ‘it’s’ = ‘its’ It would seem Naia had run into some of those, and Armanie ...

People killing them to soon, without letting them develop, grow. The only typo I found: to is meant to be too . :D I think I've said this too often, ...