MysticalBlood

ok thanks, i'll keep that in mind. :p :elephant:

what is a 'period'? it's been bothering me for ages and thanks for the help!

ok thanks for your reviews! i know i spotted the whatever error but i forgot to change it...i wrote up to 'i was dying' about a year ago, i just ...

NO that would take forever. i do not write on my ipod touch... ugh, hate them but they're nice every so often... if i cba to get the laptop out ...

Ah I always make spelling mistakes lol and I do have trouble with the five senses and grr iPod touches are annoying! Not accurate. Thanks anyway!

i've done some more. :) Half an hour earlier The sun rained down on Claire’s face, causing her to raise her arm and shield her sight. It was bad enough ...

i know it's fan fiction but it's not got any of the characters from the film in it. :P and this was just a quick thing i did in my ...

it helps if you've seen the film 'Avatar'. an avatar is a man made being made by scientists... i guess i should mention that in my full version. :-/

i know i messed up with the comma's, i wrote it half a year ago but i know where comma's should go now... i don't think i checked it through ...

thanks there's loads more.. i've done about 30 + pages, maybe 40... i don't really know. When i've done that i'll start writing upthe full version.

OMG so funny! This isn't even a review, it's just me saying fantastic! Loved it! Ending is sooo funny.

Hey altair does appear in AC2 lol. i love the game. it's amazing. i haven't done part 2 yet coz am busy with other stories, i'm reading and i got ...

The full version is in the fantasy section at the bottom of the first page. ;) I'll get rid of the monkey part lol.

PLease can someone review? I know it's long but you don't have to read all of it. ;)

Do you mean “meters”? No. english people spell it like that. americans spell it with meters. they also spell color like that whereas we spell it like colour. don't know ...