MysticalBlood

Avatar all the way. The attention to detail is just flawless, the story line is full of suspense and you simply do not want the film to end! Granted, the ...

This is brilliant! I really loved it, i just thought that maybe you could have stretched it out a bit longer. It was too fast paced, there wasn't much attention ...

Wow! This is brilliant! I love The Boy in The Striped Pyjamas, so this was an instant read for me. I just want to say, you captured the mood and ...

OK, i like this, but there's not much i can say seen as other people have said it. And you don't want to misuse short sentences too much, it can ...

Haha omg. I think everything has been said but lol this was VERY funny and random. xD I LOVE IT. Keep up the... amazingly short and funny stories. Also, don't ...

well this is something different... it starts out with great potential, really gripping. But then i find it just gets more rushed, and rushed, and rushed towards the end. try ...

well... I watch it occasionally but I don't know how it ends. But all my friends watch it and have the DVD sets so I could get them to read ...

Oh my god seana this is amazing! You seem to have used seductive too much though, once was nice. i love what that is, but i have no idea what's ...

Ok, i really liked this... it's really gripping and i enjoyed how you wrote. It reminds me of 'The way of shadows' but i guess a lot of assassin stories ...

Ah hey I remember this from tomb raider eidos forums lol! I loved it and I just think this seems amaturish now, first of all you have quite a lot ...

Hey tarryn!!! ;) I really like your poem!!! Definitely reminds me ofthe stuff you do at writers club . :D I like your rhyming too!!! I'm rubbish at reviews so ...

Ok so this is really good!! So you are wondering how to start a sentence differently? Well, instead of 'but' you can use 'however' 'on the other hand' ... I'm ...

Oh my goodness!!! This is truly brilliant! I love the way you wrote in first person, it made you feel like he really was confused! You've used first person well ...

Hmmm... how about 'The way of shadows'? it's an awesome book, i'm reading it at the moment, it's an assassination fantasy book set (i'm guessing) a few hundred years ago. ...

wow! I absolutely love this! very gripping, i want to read the next part badly! Apart from a few mistakes that have been pointed out, this is brilliant. keep writing ...