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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The exaggerated life of a teen

    It's called exaggerated for a reason. It's suppose to be about a teenage girl who is making up half the stuff she talks about. She sees her life as impossibly ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A search for time

    So beautiful. I like how you sadly try to recall memories of a childhood that seems so far away and lost. Your language is really inspiring and poetic, I would ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The exaggerated life of a teen

    Thanks so much for the great advise, I will most definitely use it. The reason I didn't develop my characters is because this isn't just any story for me, there ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The exaggerated life of a teen

    I just want to say thank you so much. It really means a lot to me for your comment on my work

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Outside

    I love the language you use and how you use it. And how it is ok to make mistakes and how a new life or ' journey' lays ahead and ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: lakeside

    Your writing is so moving

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: lakeside

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    Your writing is so moving

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: lakeside

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    Your writing is so moving

    May 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: The Forgotten Sorceress

    Your writing is fantastic and beautifully executed, and your title if eye catching

    May 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: The Forgotten Sorceress

    Your writing is fantastic and beautifully executed, and your title if eye catching

    May 13, 2015


You're given the form, but you have to write the sonnet yourself. What you say is completely up to you.
— Madeleine L'Engle, A Wrinkle in Time