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Re: how many cyberpunk tests am i gonna do? who knows. warning: lots and lots of bad language.
Oh my, that's a lot of swearing! Kinda like me! I love the made-up swear that Claire said. It made me laugh XD The name should be Foul Daggers'. It ...
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: Magazine
You need to identify what your audience would want to see. Do they like art? Food? Literature? Photography? Photography it is! Take interesting pictures like the sun setting, animals, plants, ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Martha
I love this poem. The first stanza sounds like Martha is being described in a negative and bad way (somker, drinker and often a liar). The way I interpret the ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (6.2)
Wow, this is very long! First person is a great idea to tell what's happening in the story as told by the character. No drugs? Whoever said that is correct. ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: In The Beginnings (Chapter 2)
A litle bit short but very nice. I like the onomatoepia of the water hitting against the metal pan at the beginning. I would like to see more onomatoepias in ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Survival (Rebooted) Arc 1
Wow! This is very long! I'm surprised that it took you half a year to do a single arc! I could guess that it's your hardwork and countless thoughts? Though, ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Love and Loss
Hello hello! Just wanna say that the poem is very deep that I can't even convey the message (either that or my grade in English poetry is super low, ahhhhh). ...
Apr 23, 2017