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Thanks for the review! I've been working on this book for a long time and wanted it to be great! I got to page 100 and something though and realized ...

Thanks for the review! It was really helpful! I was writing my book and got to around page 107 but realized that there was a massive plot hole and rereading ...

I like this. I think it's one of the most legit things I've read on this site. It's very revealing about how the next generation operates. I think this is ...

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I like the pattern you made with having every stanza around the same size and how there are dots separating them. I think you could use some commas at the ...

Okay, so I've been doing reviews for the past 2 weeks now and haven't gotten any points but after you told me to submit it as a review I was ...

Thanks for the review! This is just a little thing that becomes more important as the story goes on but I've been pretty busy and haven't been able to post ...

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That was good and I loved the comedy in it. I think if you keep on writing you could have a great story. I'd love to see where it's going. ...