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Hey, lucyy :D I just wanted to tell you what I thought about the preface of your story - I really liked it! It really was a little short, and ...

My Twilight-obsessive-phase is over. I still kind of like it, but I don't like it as much as I used to a few weeks ago. Maybe it's because the first ...

I was more or less forced to read it for my English AP class and it did make me wary to hear it's actually a play. However, I thought it ...

I didn't read any of the other reviews, so sorry if I repeat stuff ... I saw her again [how about you tell us when he saw her again?] . ...

I liked it! It was very interesting to read and I'd love to read more - so pretty please turn this into a series? ;) A few things I've noticed ...

Here I am, just as I said ;) But don't expect too much from my review *go hides in a corner* Well, I liked your poem a lot. As of ...

Hey :D Awesome that you posted something ;) Here's my review: Chapter 1: The Origin of the Rose I turned around, and Robert was right behind me. “Do you wish ...

Here's my review, just as requested ;) Sorry it's coming a little late ... Prologue "In which we meet two men, the shepherd and the lamb." “Murder is not the ...

I'm kind of missing Adam already :D When's he going to appear again? By the way - and no offense intended ^^ - did you base this story on Twilight? ...

I agree with Haruno Sakura on her comments - especially the one with Avery and Claiborne. It's very sudden that they aren't mentioned anywhere and suddenly, they are there, so ...

This story is really addicting :D And I think you're getting better and better, too ;) You do make some mistakes with tenses, switching from past to present. I'd also ...

Hey again ^^ Again, this was a very nice chapter. I loved the descriptions of the house and the guys - good job! However, you should give us more info ...

Hey, I don't really know what to say, since I think the others have pointed out everything I noticed while reading, meaning grammar mistakes and sentence structure. The prologue was ...

Very nice chapter again ^^ I liked the way you described the relationships between Katie and Amanda and the twins. Katie looked in at her several times a day; she ...

I really liked how you began this story! I feel so bad for Amanda, though. A few little things I'd "critique": you might want to put the flashback into italics ...