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Re: Do Not Tell Me Who Or Who Not To Envy
Very impressive work, i enjoyed it a lot. I envy the poet too by the way even though i am one. I suppose its the fact that i envy the ...
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Re: i'm really really sorry
Your going to make me cry! So beautifully written oh my gods so beautifully written. I dont know if you were trying to protray a war story because so you ...
May 16, 2015 -
Re: Restless Night
Hello fellow demigod (i hope, haha) i often had sleep problems too. Simple and to the point about the problems of sleeping, i like how it how it agrees with ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: The Artist, the Writer and the Unfinished Sonnet
The way you wrote about teenage Love - actually Love in general - is absolutely stunning. Not only did i get the challenges of two teens trying to connect on ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: My Teenage Tale
Simplicity is best, to much detail put into a poem can turn in bad but you kept it nicely balanced. Some of your rhymes are a little stretched but it ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited
Omg! Im not the only person who has a problem with rhyming. I have to constantly remind myself that writing poetry doesnt mean you have to rhyme because yeah i ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: don't break hearts, break minds
Heartbreaking, its truly heartbreaking. I have loved someone so much in the past that when they walked away it broken me in two, all i wanted to do was kick ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Trying To Write
I really like your poem, i can sympathize im working on getting over a really bad string of writers block and its not easy i know. Your poem is really ...
May 4, 2015
