My21Heartbeats

Wonderful! Short but nonetheless wonderful! The repetition of the same sounds make it pleasing to hear and read. It can be a little hard to visualize and understand what you ...

This intrigues me and it is masterfully written. I really enjoyed the prophecy as it sounded poetic and it broke away from the voice of the mother. That brings me ...

I would suggest that you vary your sentence structure in order to make the experience even more enjoyable than it already is. I would also like to suggest that you ...

This is beautiful in every sense of the word! It is also a very cute entry. The emotions that you must have felt during this time are portrayed extremely well ...

I enjoyed this thoroughly! The words flowed together nicely and I could envision everything that was happening. Some parts were not as smooth as other but overall it was fantastic. ...

I love this! It has so much emotion and pain and power in between its line. I enjoy the usage of imagery and certain diction choices just add to the ...

Wow! This is gorgeous! I would actually love to hear this on the radio. It sounds smooth as can be and features a ton of emotion. Its truly easy to ...