Murphy2493

Thanks for the review! In answer to your many questions almost all of them would be answered if you start at the beginning. Also, there are things that you will ...

Thanks! and I totally get your comment about the passing out as a transition and I have to agree it is repetitive. any suggestions are welcome as you know. There ...

I would never say no to a review

Did you read chapter 8?

Thanks so much for the suggestions! I try my best to proofread before submitting my work but I guess I missed some. I also want to apologize for the wait. ...

Your story sounds interesting. I would love to read it :)

Thanks so much for the review! I hate writing the awful parts but yes it is necessary. I have always hated books that put too much detail into settings. Like ...

There are people I still think about when I was a teen and younger. The more they mean to you the more it hurts when things go wrong and I ...

Thanks for the review! It was intentional. I wanted to give the reader a little bit of a view of how Melanie was because she is mentioned quite a bit. ...

Haha thanks so much! I suppose I am just not that confident yet. I wanted to see how people would respond to my work first and honestly I'm beyond surprised ...

You got points for the review. Some times this site can be a little funky. I tried posting a review for someone once and it wouldn't go through.

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My brain is exploding with gratitude. Thank you so much :). I love leaving a bit of suspense to keep my readers on the edge. So forgive me if I ...

Thanks so much!! I will definitely try keeping my paragraphs shorter. I am such a sucker for detail that I think I go a little over board some times.

You are very very welcome. I think just putting your experience out there makes you a brave and strong person. I do believe that your writing will help others who ...