Munchkinzizzles

It's a cool song, however I would expand it. It seems more like a poem than a song. That's all I can really say. :)

Anyone? Please, help!

I liked it, but I would just suggest making it a bit more coherant with your characters.

Thanks for your encouraging words, Theif. The whole concept of a beggar who had very little materialistic things, but had so much in things that money couldn't buy was just ...

Thanks for reviewing! I'll read through it and see what I can change. I really appreciate it. Chapter 2 will be coming soon. Please review that one, too. I'd love ...

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Given me something to think about. I'll keep looking at it and seeing if I can make it better. :)

Thanks for the input. :D I'll definitely change some stuff, but I'll only post it once all of your corrections have been made so I don't have to post it ...