Munchkinzizzles

Thanks for responding. I will totally let you know when the next bit is up. :) What did you think about the whole concept? Was it sort of cheesy, or ...

I just wanted to be clear that my comment wasn't meant to be totally defensive, or rude or sassy. Some people can get pretty sensitive. When posting a harsh review ...

*This comment is not meant to be sassy, rude, or mean* I think that the dialogue is useful in my story because it shows that EJ and her mother have ...

Was I too harsh? :( I hope not. I wasn't meaning to be mean or anything. :)

No offense taken from the corrections. I realize that no one is ever gonna get anything perfect on the first try, right? The reason that dialogue comes into play so ...

Anyone? Correct me? Help me out?

Why I wrote this poem: My sister had a friend--a really close friend, who ended up being extraordinarily fake and really hurting my sister. So, I hope that clears up ...

I enjoyed it. Please tell your friend that he should create a YWS.

Anyone? Please?

Chapter 2: The Mayor’s Assistant Now, in that same town of Winchester, there lived a mayor named Smith. Now, Mister Smith’s first name was unknown to everyone except his assistant ...

Hee. Funniness!

Use Arizona. It doesn't rain there often.

Here's the next one. Dear Diary: I'm going to start calling you friend instead of diary, because you're the closest thing that I have to a friend. So here goes. ...

2010. That's the year. I forgot to change the date on the second sentence. And sorry about the femininity of the piece. I'm really used from writing from a girl's ...

There is actually music that it goes to that makes it seem more rythmic. You'd have to hear it to hear the rythm. Sorry that it doesn't.