MsBamaMeagan

This poem is touching and I absolutely loved it. I know how you feel I think everybody's felt like that once in there life even if they don't care to ...

I think at the last line in the poem you put to many words having tiny and petite just didn't make sense. I would take out the tiny and just ...

:mrgreen: :mrgreen: I love how you said "Boy meets girl, Girl kisses boy.She played with his heart just like a toy" I thought that was the cutest thing. Your very ...

I loved this story, I cant wait to read the next chapter to it. Very good overall. Hey, can you do me a favor and make the next chapter really ...

That was very good. I've never read a poem like the one you just made but I do have some critcism though. I got kind of confused by this little ...

your poem was very good, its like this is what the person is thinking and how he's feeling. I like how you symbolized it by saying scar kisses I don't ...

your story is overall good but you've got some grammar mistakes "Theworld to me is a bowl of rotting emptyness, feelings that people dont knoe about.When they realise that this ...