Like me; Love me; Always be true.
My heart skipped a beat when I was by you.
With lips as smooth as the sea.
From the first kiss, I knew you loved me.
With eyes as fierce as the moon.
Gaze into my soul and see my heart bloom.
Crazy, might I be, but you had the key to my heart.
Neverless the will to tear it apart.
Will this love last forever?
Or has its prime been in the past?
I want this to last forever, not now.
This love, so vicious, will make you howl.
Beat, beat, my heart goes.
Insane emotions lift me to my toes.
With hands so warm and steady.
For you, my love, I am ready.
Like me; Love me; Always be true.
I cannot take the pain of living life without you.
With no heaven or hell to separate us in the end.
Be with me forever, and I’ll take your sin.
For as my heart is contempt in your hold,
In our old age, our story will be told.
Boy meets girl, Girl kisses boy.
She played with his heart just like a toy.
Through many fights and all the pain.
Enough emotion to drive you insane.
Boy met girl and made it all better,
And as he wrote that heart-felt letter,
The closing words, that not only he said,
“I love you forever” The letter read.
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"Boy meets girl, Girl kisses boy.She played with his heart just like a toy"
I thought that was the cutest thing. Your very talented and I would like it if you would check out some of my poems and see if there is anything that can be put in them that would make them better. I would really appreciate that and if you would give any advice. thanks