MrTilgen

I actually prefer to write mystery/suspense stories that has both the perspectives of the detectives and the killers. That way you can see how close or how far they are ...

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When you read later in the story you are going to learn the histories of some of the characters (both including the protagonists and the antagonists). I want the readers ...

What I did in this chapter was introducing the other side of the story. Throughout the story, you will read through the 3rd person perspective of Douglas in some chapters, ...

I love the detail you described throughout the chapter. But I think you should describe the setting more at the beginning at the story. Such as where it took place. ...

Chapter Two should be in release with in a couple days or a week. Thank you for your attention.