MrTalljoker

Well Chrissy, I'm not Chinese and opium is still pretty great to me. But my inspiration was a hatred for myself. I've always had dreams where I would burn myself ...

Personally Im a fan of your poems, each one is a nice feel, each one an experiment thats always fun to observe and crack. I like that about your work, ...

Dear Priceofwords, I have reread the work, and yes I should say, you are right. I still hold to the idea that at parts it's a little confusing, but that ...

You're welcome, and yea I'd personally do the "Ey, Ey, kid," line, just to let the audience know that I'm doing that for this story. I find the as soon ...

Im sorry for the one paragraph. but YWS is acting weird im very sorry.

Dont worry dear, Im ever so grateful to be on a site with such informative reviewers, thank you sincerely :)

ITS A COLT 45! ITS A GUN HOW COME NO ONE KNOWS THIS! sorry, but thank you for your comments

Thank you for your comments and to awnser your qestion yes this is a personal memoir of my past, and to be honest demons I still face to this day.

Thank you for your comment this is a first draft actully. But I did intend to make it sound a little juvenile. Its the ragging emotions of someone who lost ...

it is a gun name a Colt 45 I described it in a diffrent way.

Hey there wordsandwishes This is a good piece of work reminds me of a much shorter version of a poem written by the great Robert Frost witch is, in my ...