Mr.SpaceMan

This is a very well thought out and written poem. I love how you were able to arrange the poem to feel as if the poem is written by a ...

This is a terribly sad story and although i have never experienced this first hand, i still feel terrible. It's also amazing how you were able to tell such a ...

Welcome to YWS. This is a good start and has potential to be very entertaining however this has a few grammatical errors and structure errors that aren't quite ready for ...

Very well written and enjoyable. I like how you were able to keep the poem general enough that people were able to imagine what they were running away from. It ...