Mr.Knightley

Hey, fellow Knight! I'm here to review. Well, I'll ignore the cheesiness (the small amount there is) and focus on the things that I liked. Your imagery! 'twas awesome! It ...

Hm...I'm not sure I quite like this yet, but for small reasons. For one, it's extremely short. Sometimes that works, and sometimes it doesn't. This time it doesn't. ;) Also, ...

Hi! I'm here to review. As a whole, I kinda liked this! I like the imagery you use, and it's cool what you're writing about. The sun continues upwards, Into ...

Hi! I'm here to review. I have to say, this is a great poem. I loved it. The message is completely honest and heartfelt, and I think it's a great ...

Before anyone else reads this, you definitely need to format correctly. Right now every line is jumbled up together in a big sloppy mess. It's hard to tell where one ...

Hi! I'm here to review. I really liked this, Tranquility. Your message is one of honesty with others, but more importantly, it speaks of honesty with oneself. That is such ...

Hi Skins, my ever faithful review-requester! I am here to do just that. Well, since this is just a rough draft, I'm going to skip the nitpicks and get right ...

I disagree with Elinor, somewhat. It was definitely rushed, and could use some proper punctuation, but I think it was a fun read. It's very lighthearted, and I don't think ...

Hi Shubhi! Here as requested. Well, since this is only for a school paper and you've already had so many great reviews, I don't think you should change anything that ...

I'm a tad confused. How is this in any way a poem? It certainly doesn't read or look like one. :/ Well, poem or not, here are some things I ...

Hi Tiger! Here to review as requested. ;) Since these two lovely ladies who posted before me stole all the glory for themselves, I'm left with very little to critique. ...

Hi Smexay! I'm here to review. Well, I'm going to start with the one I liked first, because that will be easier. Loving you is like breathing, how can I ...

Hi Biffle! I'm here to review. A couple odd things I noticed about this: 1) Kind of out of the ordinary for you, a male, to write in the first ...

Hi Maddy! This is going to have to be a quick review, because I'm pressed for time. Don't worry though, because you've had a few excellent reviews already! :D I ...

SKIIINS! HI! The alluring scent of freshly cooked bacon surrounded me as I slowly opened my tired eyes. Yum. Bacon. Both Lisa and Annabel sighed at my reaction. :smt005 I ...