Mr.Knightley

In the still of the evening This is such an overused phrase. Any line with "in the still of" as a starter is destined to fail. :P Try and say ...

Hi Spy! I'm here to review on Reviewing Sunday! Woot! :D So. Your poem. I honestly disliked it. Not only was the lack of grammatical correctness a horrifying experience to ...

Hi Screamandshout! :smt003 Just one wish, is all I want. Just a chance, to be all I'm not. This is a very good start. The rhyme is nice and natural. ...

This was awesome! Apart from a few of the things Ben mentioned, I really enjoyed this. I suppose that's because my sister and I play chess occasionally, and this reflects ...

Hey Silent! So I agree with Evi on the cliches. It actually annoyed me reading this, if I'm being honest. I truly hate it when I have to read the ...

Hey Eli! Here to review. : ) So I'm not going to go much into the nitpicks (it's Reviewing Sunday! :D); instead I'll just give you my thoughts on this ...

I feel the softness of the grass on my back, The coolness of the wind on my face, The hardness of the rock at my feet, The warmth of the ...

Hey Horseradish! :D So I really do like the idea of this poem. I wasn't quite expecting that little twist at the end. But if I'm being honest, that was ...

Hey there, Jemo! I'm going to have to agree with these two loverly ladies before me... This needs some work. Not very much! Well, it kind of depends on how ...

Hey there, Smiley! :D I'm here to review. First off, this is well-written for the most part. You have a good understanding of the fundamentals of writing, and it definitely ...

Sorry, but I have no patience for this poem. Or rather, I have no patience for poems like this. Let me explain. For one, there is nothing emotionally inspiring in ...

Hey Stori! I'm here to review. First, I'm going to go over the nitpicks that I have. They're the least important and easiest to do. :D "You three go ahead. ...

Hi! Sorry for the late review. Mmm...Timmy likey. I love reading stuff like this, when some character is possessed by demons, and you get all scared. For a prologue, it's ...

Hey iheartbooks! Or Leah? Whatever. ;) So this is pretty cool. I like how you mixed acrostic and free verse into one, and managed to make it rhyme, at that. ...

Hi Dante! Okay. I'm just going to say that I don't like this. Like Lily said, it comes off as a little emo and sad; almost self-centered, in a way. ...