Mr.Knightley

Hi! I really like this. You've thrown the reader into something very dramatic and abstract, and most likely something unwelcome, I think. It's very clear that this is supposed to ...

Eek! I feel like famous! From my very biased point of view, this was awesome. I would say all of that, and it was strangely similar to how I would ...

Eeek!!! *blushes* I can't believe I didn't see this coming. And you know, of course, that I already L'd my AO at this, so I'll try to tone it down ...

I know some people will hate me, but I didn't like the Fellowship of the Ring. I've heard so much impossible praise forit, and from so many great authors, that ...

Haha! This is me, 100%. That's hilarious, but at the same time not so. Back to the poem. (duh) I really like this poem. It's nice to read something that ...

This is a clever piece. You've struck a nerve that everyone thinks of at some point: Death. We can push it away, but it's always there, waiting. You've captured the ...

First off, let me say that I like the title. It caught my attention from the start. Also, I love the plot, and how you used the Greek gods and ...

Nitpicking I stared at the red flames dancing on a silent beautiful melody. It's warm battling the freezing night, It lives, it shines a radiant light. I think this should ...

Let me just start off by saying that I really loved this poem. I agree that it is refreshing, like a cold wind on a summer day. (Or an ice ...

Hi! I don't normally review romance, but I'll give it my best. Punctuation I found a few of spelling and punctuation marks throughout. Nothing big, but it can tend to ...

I definetly think you should keep writing this story! I would never have thought to write a story from this perspective. The only thing I didn't like was the fact ...

I loved this! It has a dark humor that reminds me also of Lemony Snicket's a Series of Unfortunate Events. It is similar to Clive Barker's Mister B. Gone, too. ...

I think this story is vaguely reminiscent of Clive Barker's Abarat. The setting of the town is much like the one he created in 'Chickentown, USA'. I get the impression ...

I really love this story. I always liked creation tales, because they involve unimaginable lengths of time and power. This has many similarities to a story I started to write ...

My only critique is this: there is no atmosphere! I have no idea where this character is. I hate it when I have to imagine for myself if it should ...