Mr.Knightley

Hi! Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this...I never do that. :| But let's get started! The humans learned, never again would they trespass into the god’s ...

Hiya Skins! Well, I agree with you, somewhat: this chapter has no real point, and slows down the pace of the story unnaturally. I think that you should definitely mention ...

Several things: 1: You described me exactly. I loffs you. 2: Why does Kamas always have to win? 3: Were me and Nutty (Shadow) arm in arm, dancing to Pirate ...

Hi Skins! I am here to review! First off, this doesn't need nearly as much help as you think it needs. I actually really enjoyed it! This was extremely heartfelt, ...

Hi Firearris! I'm here to review like you asked. Story-wise, I was interested to learn about this person; you've managed to include enough information to intrigue me without going on ...

Skiiiins! Hiylo! I'm here to review as requested. Fundamentally/structurally, I found a few mistakes. Nothing big or out of the ordinary, but I thought I'd point them out anyways. :P ...

Wow, Skins. This was awesome! I loved every second of it--no lie! You have a great way of pulling the reader into the story, and I felt exactly what Maxxie ...

Nutty! Hi! You did another poem! Exclamation marks galore! Yay! (!!!!!) *ahem* Anyways, you have yet to disappoint me, Nutty dear. This was awesome. I have no idea what iambic ...

Hi there! This is going to be a very short review because I'm pressed for time. But let's start! I think the main thing I need to mention right now ...

Just a quick review, because I'm pressed for time. Let's get started! I like the concept behind your poem, but you tend to ramble at times, and the flow is ...

Hi Night! I really like this. It's very lighthearted and different, something I don't see too often. :P Only a few insignificant nitpicks: Dear Book, Please forgive me book, for ...

Hi smorgishborg! I'm here to review. *sigh* I wasn't a fan of this, man. For me, it read like a journal entry or a piece of prose instead of poetry. ...

Hi Maddy! I'm here to review as requested. Let's get started! :D I have to say, this was loads better than I thought it would be! Already you have me ...

Hope! I is here as requested! Me going to review now, no? Okie dokie! First of all, I'm glad you wrote a short story. I don't really like reviewing "novel ...

Hi Sura! I'm here to review. Hmm...I'm not quite sure what to make of this. It's very well written, but I'm having trouble deciphering what it's about. That's not any ...