Morrigan

Isn't it interesting that meter makes a bigger difference than quantity? I started out relying on syllable count at first, too, but there's a whole hidden society of meter!

Hi! Thanks for the review! I really appreciate you pointing out these things. I will take a look! Glad you enjoyed.

Apri, you are wonderful. I was a MOOD last night, so I really appreciate your suggestions! I%u2019ll look at it a bit more for sure. Thank you again!

Thank you, yellow. You just made me feel awfully good by calling me the poetry queen

You%u2019re welcome! If you write a second draft, let me know!

Hey! Thanks for catching that! I converted this poem from no caps into regular capitalization patterns, so that one must have slipped through my radar. I don%u2019t mean to ask ...

Hey Pernicus, thank you so much for this insightful and helpful review! I appreciate your thoughts!

Heyo! Where are you seeing the rhyme? I didn't intend it to at all, so I'm a little lost!

Hey, thanks for your thoughts! I honestly forgot that I wrote this, so thanks for putting it in my head again. Maybe I'll revisit it!

Hi demon, thanks for your thoughts!

I appreciate that. Thank you for clarifying, and thank you for your praise!

What made you confused about the middle? Asking so I can improve the piece!

Oh siiiiiick yeah I remember you

Thanks, Allie, I am glad you enjoyed reading it!

Truth, I%u2019m not sure if you noticed, but I don%u2019t use any capital letters in the entire piece. It%u2019s a stylistic choice! Keep that in mind next time you%u2019re reviewing ...