Morrigan

That first and cursed sound great! ^_^

Naw friend, the she coins is the uniqueness of the oarsman's voice coming through. i loved that bit, that's why i didn't say anything about it. THE MAGS SEES ALL

Holy frick frack, your imagery is beautiful!

I'm so glad that you in particular reviewed this. I'll have to learn more about the sciencey things. I'm only a humble English major ^_^

I actually wrote this in like fifteen minutes and posted it, so it's not a surprise that I didn't think about doing the no caps and no punctuation thing omg ...

Wow, thanks! That was super helpful!

Hey! I really liked this because it's a fairy tale, and yet not a damselly in distress fairy tale. Well, there's a lady, and she's kind of in distress, but ...

I understand that they are comparing themselves to models. I think that you can get that point across without making it seem as if the narrator is putting down others ...

I really like this because it's spot on and it's super cute! Nice meter, too! I could never pull it off (and though I've never heard of the GCSE's, I've ...

OH MY GOD I DIDN"T SEE THE SATIRE

"just because they do not produce movies where there are gay and lesbian relationships doesn't mean they are speaking out against it" While it is true that they are not ...

Ah! Okay. I thought it was a different person. ^_^ Thanks for clearing it up for me!

It is in a car. So I guess that it conveyed the message well? ^_^

Okay! That's great! But we need to know that the poem is about that. You say they have hidden meaning, but the readers need to at least have a hint ...

Ah! That certainly does clear things up. However, if you could implement that more in the poem, that would be great, as we must know what the author is feeling ...