Morrigan

Well, it's a haiku, so if I made it longer, it wouldn't be a haiku. Thanks for the review! :)

This poem isn't specifically about women-- it's about society in general. I chose to portray the character as a woman because it is easier for me to identify with women, ...

Thanks for the review! I really struggled with the choice not to capitalize "benjamins" so I think I will, since I was unsure about my choice in the first place. ...

It's just a poem about a cat there's no meaning in it~ I wasn't really worried about it when I was writing it. It was just for fun. Poems can ...

Ah! That makes more sense! I know what you're talking about with the red flags now. I also thought that you were talking about the tide rather than the waves ...

NO WAY I HAD NO IDEA so cool!

Thank you! And as I was actually tipsy when I wrote this, I was expecting some issues with punctuation and things, I just didn't care at the time ^_^ This ...

I don't hate them. So many strangers around me sends me into a panic attack. :)

Ahh, you're right! Thanks for catching that!

Don't ever be worried about being mean! Thank you for the helpful suggestion. I'll keep it in mind when I edit! Thanks again! :)

Ah well, I haven't read the books. So it is what it is.

It seems that you really want me to make it longer. What would you suggest that I include in the poem? More descriptions, feelings? I wouldn't want to fill this ...

Hey, Rhia! I'm not going to give you a full review now because I'm going to bed and I just saw this, but I'll give you one tomorrow (If I ...

Thanks! The nitpicks really helped. Keep on nitpicking, and don't let anyone tell you that you're too much so. Thanks again!

The thing is, if you had to explain it to me outside of the poem, it isn't getting the point across. Therefore, that's something to clarify in your poem. :)