Morrigan

Hi there! I see that this was inspired by my poem~ I'll be back to review it later! I do think that you missed the point of my poem, in ...

There is nothing in it that would constitute an age limit. I put some of the lines in brackets to symbolize separate ideas from the rest of the stanza that ...

Thank you. :)

Hi Widders

Galerius, Thank you for your honest thoughts. I appreciate them. The poem is open to interpretation, and I think you interpreted it differently than I meant it. I won't say ...

I wouldn't call it a review, and if I have time later, I'll gladly come back and give you a real one. It is finals week, though, so we will ...

Wow, this is lovely. You do have a typo in your third section, first stanza, second line. You use "your" when it should be "you're." Happy YWSing!

1. Not including capitalization is a stistic choice. I'm well aware of conventional capilatlization rules. 2. Get up to date with current events and you'll get it.

Can you please tell me which parts you found confusing so I can fix it?

I couldn't have said it better.

It is very late right now-- and all I have to say is that I can't tear it to shreds. It's a heartache on paper, a moment of happiness encapsulated ...

There are no capitalization rules in poetry. Lumibear can choose to capitalize or not. I'd like to mention e.e. cummings, who didn't even capitalize his name. Also, you might find ...

RebelWriter, capitalization in poetry is not a rule that's set in stone. Why don't you check out this article by Aley?

It is important to search for depth in even the simplest poems, as sometimes you might miss the point of the poem. Perhaps you missed the point of her searching ...

good.