Morrigan

Thanks for the feedback. I will experiment with the line break there, though it's generally not a great idea to end a line on a preposition.

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Thank you! I'll work on that

Cool! I'm glad you have a source. You should include it in your piece.

I love Emily. Love this. Might review later.

Hi there, @unambigouswhiner ! Thank you so much for leaving some feedback for me. I know you were probably just saying you wanted to review my work, but just in ...

Thanks for your review. You actually pointed something out; that I used Ella instead of Etta. Do you know about the famous song, "At last?" This is what I was ...

Great review! Thank you! It's very useful when people interpret a poem for the author so we can see what we're putting out there. You're awesome!

Thank you, whatcha! This is very helpful! While I usually would put a hyphen between last and ditch, I was going for a double meaning there. "Your last ditch" referring ...

Thanks for your input. I intentionally included the fragment, but I will consider adding a semi-colon, which would be the grammatically correct way to break up the sentence. Thank you ...

The phrase is %u201Cseat of your pants.%u201D Hey friend, if you%u2019re going to correct my grammar, you might want to use the correct %u201Ctheir.%u201D I am aware of my grammar ...

Gotta use my English degree somehow RIP

Now I want pizza :|

Thank you! This is very helpful! :)

The point of the poem is that Christianity as a whole is an abusive cult. Do you have anything helpful to add about the literary aspects of the poem? I'm ...