Hi morrigan!
I've got to say, this poem makes me feel so happy! I especially loved the way it begins, with -
"I've got that finger snapping
Ray Charles on a crackling radio
kind of brilliance in my morning."
I love the descriptions and the imagery you've used all throughout the poem. I can picture the setting and the atmosphere and I don't know why, but it feels movie-like. It's amazing!
It's great how you've continued to build the scene and concluded it fantastically.
'i find myself humming along with his soul'
This line might just be the perfect ending to a wonderful poem. Great job!
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