Morrigan

Hello Shadow. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This has a lot of issues. I'm going to be honest. Not only does it have tons of ...

Hi there, Sherri. As steampowered has already gone over a bunch of nitpicks with you, I'll go over the general chapter. Overall, I found it pretty engaging. I was able ...

Hi, megsug! I'm here to rescue this from the green room. I really liked this, and if I had more time in my life, I would go back and read ...

Hello. I'm here to rescue your work from the green room. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Honestly, I felt like it was dry. It tells ...

Strange, wat r u doing. Satire is satire, yes, but someone else has to get the joke, and I feel like few people would. Is this a parody of general ...

Hi, Rhia! As always, beautiful work. untitled 1 The first thing I notice is the title. Specifically, the uselessness of the title. It says nothing about the poem, does not ...

Hi there! So I like the concept. I like that you talk about the form of the poem within the poem, and break the form of the poem to attract ...

Hello, Iron. I was going to rescue this from the green room, but it looks like someone beat me to it. That doesn't mean I can't review this lovely poem. ...

Hi Tenyo! This hooked me. I really like what you did here. The situation is tense and has a nice, terrible little ending. However, I feel like I need more ...

Hi, Joker. Here's my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Why is any of this happening? There's no context. Characters need motivation to do things. While Jackie says that ...

Hello! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room. Technically, this poem is interesting. The technique you used is not very common, as it's rather difficult to pull ...

Hello! Love is hard to define. You've taken quite a valiant stab at it, but really, how can you define love in an itty bitty excerpt? The thing about this ...

Hello! This was quite gripping. I really liked it! The story was nice and tells us about the time when this story is taking place. However, there were a few ...

Hello! I haven't read the other chapters, but since this has been in the Green Room for so long, I decided to rescue it. While I'm not really a fan ...

Hey, Mem. This is very lovely and all, but you've got some mad grammar issues going on here. Also, if you're trying to write this with a professional tone, and ...