Moony

i've read Chosen, whichever that one is and I thought it was pretty good, I'd like to read the other ones to

YAY! oh my god olivia this made me cry at the end because its over!

XD, olivia I'll fix everything later and I'm glad you like it shadowed_mist the next chapter will be up in a few days

okay guys... sorry i've put off writing the next chapter but alot of things have come up just give me like maybe a week an i'll have posted it ^_^

Okay, I think everyone else has pretty much covered everything... But, I love this! Its awesome an I would greatly love to read more! An your description was incredible! I ...

thankees to all!

Mwahahahahahahahahahaha! I will post very soon my friends! Look out for it 'cuase it could be on at any time!

sorry this time i am editing it

well... hmmm.... i really liked this actually! it was awesome and i... unlike some people... liked the first part i hope you continue to write this! i think it was ...

hrmmm.... well your description of the room is perfect. but... more description on the baby is needed and maybe using he rather than the old man while talking about him. ...

i am editing it right now!

Sorry guys but I did rush through this last night si I could get some sleep. I am going to edit this and add stuff though.

hmmmm.... so many reviews.... wow....

Oh My Gosh! I' not really into this kind of music but it is so awesome! The lyrics are perfect with everything! I wonder what it would sound like it ...

Once again dw you amaze me with your writing and description. WOW! I love this so much, so much emmotion goes down into this dw! Your awesome at your writing ...