MoonlitDream57

Holy shietcakes dooood! This is going to be powerful. You can place this story into the categories of psychology, supernatural, and horror. It seems to me that Layla is schizophrenic, ...

Thank you very much for your thoughts! :) I do like your suggestion about the protagonist to make the reader wonder if he's also dead. However, I'm conflicted because I've ...

I'll work on those areas that you pointed out--I have trouble with keeping the same tense. As for Sam telling the reader that he didn't believe in the cannibal, I ...

Thank you very much! I was a bit worried the beginning would need more tweaking, but I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! This piece is the one I'd say ...

Yes, it is a short story. I planned to make it a cliff-hanger, as I usually do with these pieces. The protagonist was very much alive. I just thought it ...

Thank you! I'm glad you didn't expect it; that means I did it right. And thanks for pointing out that sentence; I'll fix that. When it came to Ben describing ...

Kinda was inspired by Silent Hill 1-3 with the whole fog thing... Also, the whole idea of a cannibal freaks me out sooo that's why I chose that as the ...