MonsieurRosseau

Ah, vivid description, tense mood, and fears that we all can identify with. Such vignettes are always fun. Well, as far as actual problems with this work, I'd say the ...

(Not a review.) This story is made of awesome. I was too enraptured to try finding fault with it. If I could, I would vote this to win the unlikely ...

I... Don't know what to say about this poem. The inconsistent rhythm is either purposefully disquieting or obviously imperfect, and the rhyme scheme seems utterly arbitrary. It's hard to even ...

Hi! Nice metaphorical poem! I enjoyed it. Um, I might just be reading it wrong, but the rhythm of the second two lines seems to be inconsistent. I tried tapping ...

Hi there! Hope you don’t mind another review! These were some problems that stuck out to me: 1. Some of your rhymes don't quite work. Just because the last letters ...

Hello there! Nice poem you've got here. A few things I didn't understand, though: 1. The third line -- I think you're saying she brings the night air with her, ...

I must say, I adored the ending of the plot. It's a simple tale, true, but it's deep and memorable at the same time (which is what makes a good ...

Ah, two things popped out at me when I was reading it. In the last stanza, "worth" and "words" don't quite make a partial rhyme. It sounds off a bit. ...

Firstly, I like the idea. It's very, well, vivid. The pyromaniac within me swoons. That said, I wish to ask a question. Hmm... The last stanza is a lot different ...

Nice concept, by the by, but indeed the flow is slightly off. As you mentioned, the stanzas are rather inconsistent. Might I make a suggestion of how to make it ...