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Re: Once Alone
It's not bad but you can always do better. I can tell these are interesting lyrics.
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Lair of Beast
The story is a little quick in parts. Other than that, it's not that bad. Just describe what the beast looked like. If I might say so, but what I ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Finally! (Please review ASAP... HELP!!)
Nice story- I miss having a dog. I would elaborate more on the dog than the carride- you made the focus of the story a bit ambiguous, but because of ...
Oct 21, 2010