MoMo

This was really good! there are a few things that could be fixed, but the story its self is great. He wasn't there for her last chemo, and after seeing ...

I thought This had some good and bad points. I didn't really get what was happeing in the story but I felt connected to the girl in the story, it ...

I thought this was really good! there were a few mistakes, but other then that I loved it. “Yes really, you silly girl.” He laughed I thought this felt a ...

I loved the story! the twist at the end made it so perfect. =) the only thing that felt weird to read was when it jumped to her being scared ...

I thought this was pretty good, needs a read over for a few simple mistakes. though I think you should try to get the emotions across better, make the reader ...

This is really good =). I know lots of people who feel this way, you can deffinatly add on to this and create somthing longer and more in depth(ie, a ...

I Really love the idea, the story already has me hooked and I can't wait to read more. you should probably show more emotion really describe how she felt instead ...