Miyakko

Hi Sopster01, Honestly, I can't critique this...it's too good! So here I shall babble on about how loveable it was! So you can totally ignore this so-called "review". An incredible ...

Hey FLyerS, This is the first review I've done in a while, so here goes... It was really great! It was different from all those other romantic, love poems I've ...

Hi BehindtheMask, I really didn't mind this poem! I'll leave all grammatical and rhyming errors alone (since most have already been said!) so I won't hassle you anymore on that! ...

Hi HaydenMacaw, I really liked this poem! I didn't mind the repetition at all. Some lines could be extended though, to help make the poem flow better, making it smoother. ...

Hi Persephoneia, Wow! Now this is a dark poem! Amazing! The descriptions were incredibly clear, and I felt all the feeling that your character felt. It literally made me gasp! ...

Hey Writer97, Great poem! I loved the rhyming in this and you captured its theme really well. Improvements? Divide you poem into two stanzas (or verses), this will make it ...

Hi senseiawesome, This was such a great poem! A little nit-pick, read over it a maybe expand some lines by a word or two, just to get the timing right. ...

Hey Emmzziee, I loved this poem! I think it's the perfect length, so don't worry too much about that. It flowed well, had a great rhyming scheme, was simple to ...

Hey PaulClover, You said you suck at poetry, but you've actually got quite some potential! Advice? Add a little more detail into it and maybe extend the stanzas just to ...

Hey Pigeon3, This poem is better than you think! If this is what you write when you're rushing, then what you write when you're not rushing must be amazing! This ...

Hey thestorygirl, This is pretty great, you know? haha. It has such great and rich imagery and emotion, definitely worth reading. It flowed gracefully but with strong feeling. And you ...

Hi Matthews, This was a really good poem! It felt mystical and magical and the imagery was great. Problems? In some areas it rhymed, some it didn't. So maybe make ...

Hey Skorpionne, WOW! Great job! It rhyming so amazingly well, and not just that, but the timing was perfect! Timing, I think, is a really important element to a poem, ...

Hi NikkiLow, This was really great! I loved it completely! The rhyming scheme worked perfectly in this poem, but maybe re-read it because the timing was out in some places. ...

Hey Yuriiko, Haha, well I loved this poem! It had such great humor in it which is what I found really appealing. The timing was just a little out of ...