Misty

Fantastic. Stunning. What can I even say? There's nothing I can even say. I liked Jimmy best.

lol...dress in drag and do the hula... I wish i could help you out with this, but the only thing I can say is : lovely. Perfect, in fact. That's ...

*dies* ... *dies again* .... *is speechless*

You know I was absolutely positive I posted on this...and some other dude already said something on it too...how weird.

The soldiers stumbled about, having rapidly lost both the trail and their sense of direction while regaining a very sensible fear. They had lost the trail to the muck in ...

I second the black rose.

Nah. Just oddball. It's slang, not description, that's why. Puppy god should be puppy dog. Thanks!

It was good...Not great. But good. The ending was weak though, and some of the ideas seemed badly portrayed and even weak. Cliche, in other words. Certain ones that bothered ...

Second is better.

awwwwwwwwwww I"m sorry. I totaly know how you feel.

I thought the whole thing was great. First stanza-fab. Second stanza-marvy Third Stanza-intense, powerful and gut-wrenching. I love your poetry, can you tell?

Too much inconsistant rhyming, too many typos, too generic. Make it your own.

It's pretty, and halfway deep. I liked it.

*shrug* I dunno. Too late I'm already three quarters through it. Besides, there's nothing original about that...:P

oh, okay. Didn't catch that. That clears it up a bit. No problem, what am I here for? if you ever have anything you want me to crit, just PM ...