Misty

That book was fantastic. Read it w/ the whole series in 10th grade.

You're welcome. :P No self-respecting english teacher woudl ask someone to write a "story reflection." *scoffs*

Hmmmph...sounds a bit like Man on Fire, a bit like The Godfather, but with a LOT of dialogue and not much character development to show for it.

Avast! I copy/pasted this so I will get to it tonight. :)

I just used the words that came naturally, I hadn't intended to take any of them out, except the hyperglycemic, which was obvious...I'll find a good substitute word eventually.

Teeheehee, quite adorable. Opaque is a wonderful word I discovered in a little kid star wars novel, it's kind of like foggy-eyed...hard to explain. And uh...I don't know what hyperglycemic ...

I shanghied EVERYONE into a critique. I am desperate *cough* Determined. :P But yes, *cracks knuckles, puts on "bitch hat"* Let's get down to it!

*points* emo!

This is really amazing. I enjoyed it. It had a real touch of nostalgia about it. It was the last three sentences that made it, though.

Ah, I noticed something new when I was ruminating on your story in my bedroom (yes...I really was). Her name is Alissa Jewel, but her nickname is AJ. Alissa Jewel ...

Revise the last stanza "Clever" has nothing to do with anything.

Funnnnyyyyy sorry , that isn't helpful, but this was hilarious!

funnnnnnyyyy But I've seen pictures of obviously...well...hahaha

hmm. I like it? I mean it was okay, it wasn't outstanding *shrug*

I didn't like it. I'm not shy or innocent, I just found it revolting. There were elements to it that were good, like the smile one size too small, but ...