Misty

Hmm...I'm not sure how to respond to this because I don't undersand all. :) I suppose poetry is open to interpretation but! if you'd like to PM me and let ...

Well, it's very eloquent, but it's kind of cliche, I'd have to see it in the entire context of the story to really like it. 'cracked a wisecrack' need I ...

I KNOW I commented on this. Oh well. I think I said that I liked the first bit a lot due to its poeticness and the element of unusuality (is ...

I like to be honest, so I will be honest. Completely honest. the first paragraph may be one of the worst I have ever, ever read. Scratch it entirely. You ...

You know, you have the same problem I had when I was that age: not understanding proper paragraphing. But that's okay, it's easy to explain. All you do is (my ...

This is quite clever, again it's an easy read, but humorous and well put-together. Funny, too. the 'tripping over an expecially stupid rabbit' was rather humorous, and it does leave ...

I liked this; both was an easy, simple read, but quite enjoyable. Anything longer and it would have been too long, I think. A nifty little short story. Im sorry ...

some of the spacing resembles ee cummings. It would flow better if it didn't. Sentences spread out like this are a bit harder to read, the slow doesn't work. Still, ...

*snort* oh my....hahah...you know I thought you were being serious about "genius" and "appreciated talent." *laughs* oh goodness...ode to omelet, eh? Well if I were Sam I'd beat you with ...

was a but on the tacky side, with some really poorly forced rhyme schemes, and I don't think that the repitition did much to help this. I think the concept ...

aHHHHHHWWWWWW I thought I posted on this! IN FACT I'M SURE OF IT!!!! Well, let me sum it up because goodness knows I'm not doing it again. I thought it ...

Break my psychadelic waves of nausea, so many multi-coloured dreams. Normally I wouldn't put 'psychadelic' and 'nausea' in the same sentence, but it really works when you connect it with ...

We were forever conscientious of the fact that the future was a coming thing, but it was reserved in a deep corner of our minds, a place that we arrive ...

Ooer!!! I really liked this. The imagery was magnificient, the characters sort of...sadly heartwarming. The old man cliche has been done a few times but that's okay...I love your bits ...

The trouble with songs is that they're so hard to review, because a song can have the suckiest lyrics but have a rock-awesome tune and great accompaniment and it makes ...