Misty

aaaaahhhh....the old Brad is back...I loved it. a lot. I know what you mean I think we all like jack when we see his pic. I loved the part, I ...

I actually couldn't analize this because I didn't understand it, even vaugely. That's cool because the point of a poem in general is for it to be somewhat relevant, and ...

Hmm..I didn't like it. I think it would have been better off as a non-rhyming poem. Also, "might as well have gotten raped" is extreme. Too extreme. A lot of ...

wouldn't help much if I said it wasn't well written and didn't capture my attention in even the vaguest sense, would it?It's really quite poorly written, it's like a list. ...

*laughs* I have no idea why the other people didn't like this it was HILARIOUS!!!! It TOTALLY cracked me up. no, don’t you’ll suck my life’s saliva out and I ...

hmmm....I must be very out-of-the-loop. I remember ieatworms but I didn't know about all of the drama... was good. I mean, it was very vague and relatable, applicable to just ...

wow. this was so good. specifically "the woman is shaking as she paints my eyes shut " and my mother, sweet mother, never notices the horror my father, dear father, ...

no she was explaining the mask as being "she" or w/e. You rushed this like hell. Try again. And don't do that cliched "rain matching mood" thing cuz trust me, ...

I’m living the moment, The moment is now. (I actually liked that part a lot) I loudly applaud, as you take a bow. You’re a marvelous actor, You’re great at ...

lol... "Your school allows kids to wear trench coats? As a technical detail, I'd probably change that." ...yup...I've never been to a school that didn't allow it anyway...but I'll change ...

I think this would be a good background for the two kids-aka you move it up a good ten years and they're still sort-of-but-not-really friends, maybe she's super popular and ...

I liked it, it was very good. The first three stanzas=excellent. Beautiful metaphors. However-why did you start rhyming this at the last stanza? It's important to be consistant in your ...

Okay-I have decided to cut out chapter one completely. This is the next chapter (newly chapter one..) Chapter One: Concerning the Introduction of our first two Pragmatists, and their initial ...

haha, sweetie this would probably go in a poetry section, rather than a writing section, but it's all good. Welcome to the site-the poem is interesting, I didn't love it ...

:P that was something...I'm not in love with it, particularly the first paragraph. I don't like how his problem w/ room and board is immediately solved. :P people shouldn't have ...