MisterThien

Thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed the poem!

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the poem!

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated.

Thanks for the review! I made some changes to the rhythm so it rhymes more now although it's still a bit broken to symbolise heartbreak itself. Hope it flows well ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for the review! It's helped me made a few changes with the rhythm and structure!

Thank you for the review!

Thanks for the review! The structure is quite messy so I'll be sure to fix up on that!

Thanks for the review!

Hello again! :) Sorry, I just realised that you are new to YWS! Very new, actually! Well, here's my welcome: WELCOME, PERSON! :D If you have any questions or anything ...

Hahah, I like what you did here! I really admire the contrast idea and it made me smile and chortle a few times xD Keep writing poems like these! Thien ...