MissSaigon

Honestly, I am always astonished by how great you can write poems! So let’s review it :D I like the writing style a lot, the use of vagueness let us ...

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Hi, just here to leave a small review! I like the way you spaced the poem, no verse is too long and none is too short, they are quite unified ...

Very nice poem! I love it! It’s nice reading a poem about a girl instead of a boy this time, something new, I like that. By giving a location at ...

Amazing poem! Your poem really lets the reader immerse in those lines and wonder what story lies within them. Is it personal experience surfacing or an imaginary world that you, ...

The mysterious start leaves the reader many questions. The reader questions what happened to the lyrical-me, who left them, what happened to the person they address. It creates a nice ...

Hi, so I think you did a great job here! The tags and the poem fit pretty well with one another. The lyrics kinda remind me of a book I ...

This dialogue is very nicely written, many phrases sound very poetic and add a loving but also conservative aura to the text. The way they both talk in 3rd person ...

This poem was very inspiring but also deep. It hits very hard as you compared positive beautiful things like snowflakes whom we have grown fond of and associate with the ...

Grammar: Try being more aware of commas and their rules, as well as linking words as some sentence beginnings just get slammed into the readers face with no warning, making ...