MissRockers

Very simple and good! It really tells the reader how it feels like to be in it. Don't worry, you're not alone, I've been there done THAT! Gratefully, I'm sort ...

YES YES YES!!! This is wonderful. I completely agree with everything you are trying to get across to the reader. In all of these HORRIBLE times, people always wonder where ...

What a beautiful poem! I really don't have any constructive criticism. I actually liked it better when it did not rhymn for this particular poem. you'll still hold my heart ...

Overall, I love the message of this poem, but, there might be some things you need to work on. First of all, the length of this poem is very short, ...

Great great great!!! What you're feeling now is what I've felt a lot in the past also. It hurts the most when the people closest to us, hurt us, even ...

I really loved this poem because truthfully, this speaks to us all. Actually, to me, I especially liked the first two lines of this poem. But, I agree that I ...

This is a great poem. One thing that I think it might be missing is more explanation, but, I'm sure you're thinking some of this information is just common sense, ...

I do understand what you are saying to the readers, and you make it very very clear, which is great. One thing I would have to agree with, is to ...

I agree with what RoseGryffindor has to say, especially about making Shinin' and burnin' into their -ing endings. I love how you completely turn the meaning of this poem from ...