MissGangamash

I wanted to show that Wallace was never the hero of this story, and he never pretended to be. He knew Mirabelle deserved more from him, she deserved him trying ...

Wallace most definitely has accepted his fate. He knows his own limitations enough to not even play with the idea that he has any chance of getting out of this ...

Hello! The bit about Wallace's mind wandering to silly little things was again to show how he compartmentalises to try and make himself not feel things too much. He's constantly ...

Wallace does have a hollow acceptance of what is happening to him, I'm glad that's come across. As someone who is usually so full of frantic energy, unable to keep ...

Hello! Things are most definitely starting to fall apart! Kaspar so desperately wants to be there for Wallace but it's clear his grief and general negative self image is making ...

There are definitely dark times yet to come so I'm glad you sense it brewing from here. I agree that in this scene he is trying to express his thoughts ...

I think a lot of Wallace's and Kaspar's effortless in the beginning of their relationship comes from Wallace never truly believing it was real. In the back of his mind ...

Hello! Thank you for checking this out! I have been working on it since I posted and reworked a few things now that I have a clearer view of where ...

Hello! I wanted the start of this chapter to feel like the Wallace was backstage ready to put on a show. The slight displacement for the readers was intentional, as ...

Hello! This is the first time Wallace has really willingly put himself in any sort of position during all this unrest and the fact he knew he had to at ...

I can safely say our tones are vastly different but I'm glad you like the title haha

Hello! I love how you analyse the narrative so much. I think a lot of it is second nature to me when I'm in Wallace's mind so I don't really ...

Hello! I try to make all my characters as realistic as possible and I think we've all be in situations where we thought we were going to act differently than ...

Hello! Like I said with the previous chapter, this is the part of the story Wallace is least proud of so, as you said, he does rush and stumble through ...

Hello! This is definitely the calm before the storm, so I wanted the narrative to feel more retrospective. This is leading up to the part of the story that Wallace ...