MissAtomicBomb

thank you for your interest :) and your corrections. It is greatly appreciated

Thank you for your full and honest critiquing! I always appreciate it. In an answer to your question: yes, I originally did play the name off of the name Korra ...

thank you for the friendly constructive criticism! I will try fixing it and make it flow better soon!

Thank you for the encouragement. I truly appreciate it!

Thank you for your time ^_^ MissAtomicBomb

Thank you for your consideration.^~^ MissAtomicBomb

I appreciate the time you took reading my story and will keep your suggestions in mind. Thank you! ^_^

Thank you for your consideration! ^_^ I will take all of your suggestions into consideration and try them out.

I like your style of writing....:) very good story, too. I'm pretty sure the person above (or below , I haven't gotten a feel for the comments yet) covered all ...