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Re: Creation's Imitation
I like the poem, but its kind of hard to follow. Especially the second stanza. But i like the line "And yet you dare to dream" a lot. It kinda ...
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Re: Candles
Good poem :), but i think, and this is just my opinion, in the third line instead of saying light snuffed out maybe life snuffed out. But i still like ...
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Re: Dada
I like how much emotion is in this. And the movement sounds pretty interesting. I love when art movements go against the norm so dramatically. I love the 6th stanza ...
Nov 21, 2013 -
Re: Sirens, Sirens.
That was amazing. I love how its to the rhythm of Twinkle Twinkle Little Star. I also love how its short and to the point, but still has so much ...
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Re: Remember
Thats really good. :) Its pretty sad though. I like how i can really feel the anger and sadness through your words. This poem really moved me. I hope to ...
Nov 21, 2013 -
Re: Fashion Of The Christ: An Educational Poem of Coming Of Age, Immaturity, and Life
I love this poem. I really like how your not afraid to say what you really think. I wish their were more people like that. And i can relate with ...
Nov 21, 2013
