MischiefMaker

Yeah, punctuation is an issue but people have already covered that. I liked this, it conjured up some great story lines and imagery, but I think you could have one; ...

Hm, I really like the rhythm in this, it worked well but I think that some of the lines could be changed so that it just helps the flow along; ...

Hm, the rhythm was actually quite strange in this, but I absolutely love the idea; it's pretty original I must say and I just stumbled upon it while searching through ...

Mm, this was very nice Mr. Gadi. I think the idea choice, first of all, is one of best I've read on here so far. Your imagery and the emotion ...

I liked the imagery in this; you did a real good job. The rhythm worked with the flow so that the whole thing worked together; I like how it was ...

Hm, I don't understand this at all. Your structure is not the best, your gramatical spelling is terrible and the structure of your sentences could be cleaned up. I second ...

Mhm, this is good, I agree with the others. I think you really have a talent for setting the scene and for creating some good imagery that makes the reader ...

Hm, this feels good to read. I liked how you structured it and you put a lot of thought into how you could improve it; that's real good! I kinda ...

Uhm, are these all separate poems? I love Haiku poems because in their small few words, they're so beautiful and if they're done well, then they can really inspire someone ...