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Re: Stunning Eyes
Hello! Great job! The words were really beautiful and the idea was strong. Nice one. Keep it up! :)
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Maiden of Grief
Really beautiful. Strong imagery. Very, very powerful. It was really enjoyable to read, thank you. :)
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Dear Diary
Hey kristabelle! It's a lovely poem. I can just imagine it being the over voice of some dark fantasy movie hahahaha. :) Well I'm not really sure what the meaning ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet: A Poem
didnt juliet stab herself?
Jan 23, 2012 -
Re: Create-a-word contest
Nice. :) haha really fun! I'll try it sometime...maybe then I'll write a poem about it. haha.
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Confessions Of A Wallflower
Nice quirky poem! Although I've never been in that situation before, you described it so clearly i found myself feeling your disgust and angst while i was reading that poem. ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: .
You need to describe more on the feeling of envy. Use metaphors, similies, more devices. You did a good job on creating the setting. :)
Nov 14, 2011