Mirasol

It's really beautiful. I love it. Has a soothing feel to it and the narrative element was well done. My favourite lines: And I felt unworthy to in the the ...

Nice idea, could do better on the language. You can maybe leave out the "seductive, sexy" parts because it's not really appropriate and incongruous with the rest of the poem. ...

This is really beautiful and easy to understand and I LOVE IT! I can really feel the love between the speaker and the grandson. Like helping everyone you can on ...

I love it. It's really beautiful and just like the category suggests, dramatic. I saw it all, daddy, I saw it all. I like how you repeat this line again ...

this is a beautiful poem that really speaks out to its audience. I like how you keep going back to the lines on her face and describing them as something ...

Really wonderful! i felt like i was reading jodi picoult when you linked the yellow line from the beginning of the story to how it is like the kid being ...

This is just beautiful. Really, really beautiful. I love the structure and I would really like to experiment with it sometime. :) [quote]Confining my emotions to sharp downward Spirals; /quote] ...

I like your poem very much! The structure and style is very similar to mine; in fact I even wrote one about unrequited friendship too! :) To, just the two ...

Very beautiful. Simple and short but impactful. [quote]An image not one too many see. But not one too many wish to be. /quote] Why "but"? i think you should just ...

Love how you prolong each moment and describe it to the fullest. You could have added more strong vocabulary. [quote]I’ve wanted this for as long as I can remember…to finally ...

Hi! I like how it paints a beautiful scene in my head and gives me a warm, happy feeling. :) But you might wanna use some of the imagery to ...