Mirasol

Hi there! A nice, neat poem. Really detailed descriptions with a great choice of words. But it's a little ironic and confusing how you loved him so much but you ...

Wow...really strong poem. Well, I'd expect nothing less when the title reads "Tears of This Tiger" :) I love the title, by the way, really great use of alliteration. Your ...

I like the idea but you could maybe elaborate more on the idea of bullying instead of spinning more and more horrible punishments for the bully. But maybe you just ...

Nice, though I can't quite understand much of it. It's about watching your child grow up, right? Don’t think That her spark will kindle nothing. Now She looks up at ...

I really love it! I've felt it before and yours is the best description I've ever seen! Thinking back, I feel really happy now. And you know what? I'm reading ...

Wow....this is really great. really deep. Though I can't understand some parts of it. as two finite masks, printed over porcelain This is my favourite line. :) it's such a ...

I really agree and I really love it. This is such a common phenomena but no one has ever described it better than you. Oh what a pretty smile on ...

Hey! Nice poem. Although the structure is a little inconsistent and I don't know, weird, it's a really good idea. But maybe the structure is your style and it's really ...

Very nice. I like the "Tap.Tap.Tap"s, it stays in my head. :) A really good idea that no one would have thought of because its like writing about not being ...

Ok, the grammar is a little off at parts and you need to diversify your sentence structure but on the whole, it was a great story. Very engaging. Also, short ...

I loved it! :) It's really nice, good flow and vocabulary and it was easy to understand. Really makes the reader empathize with the speaker. At the end of a ...

Beautiful piece. Very detailed descriptions. You could work more on the rhythm and flow of the poem. I like the unique structure. :) The sacrifice of you may be worthwhile ...

Really clever of you to use soup as a metaphor to describe the universe in Space. :) It's poetically fancy and quirky at the same time but yet it flows ...

The word choice is really precise and great. Beautiful poem. Totally love it. A single flickering flame casts screaming shadows from my past. This is my favourite line. A very ...

Ok, nice poem, easy to understand. You might wanna use more poetic devices like metaphors or similies, imagery. The idea was there though, and as you write more and more ...